Zeus Or Achilles Poem by Uriah Hamilton
Zeus Or Achilles
Don’t let anyone hurt you,
Don’t let anyone disrespect you,
Don’t surrender your dignity
For love or money,
Don’t believe anyone who came before you
Is greater than you!
Live like a god or goddess,
Live with uncompromising confidence,
Live to walk on water
With Jesus as your guide,
Live with faith and pride.
The powers that be
Want you to crumble and fall,
They want you to cower and kneel,
They want you to forget how to feel
Sublime, redeeming love…
You can transcend every defeat,
You can overcome every broken relationship.
You must realize today
You have the potential
Of Zeus or Achilles.
Very encouraging! Achilles is an interesting choice, considering his deadly weakness. I wonder if this was intentional? Regards, Lori
All power to your pen and strength of character Uriah. A great read. 10 from love is in the air! Tai
This is a world class poem, very strong and reassuring. Regards, Sandra Fowler
Zeus also had his Achilles' heel - Hera! I think the point is that Everyman is a Hero, so long as he undertakes the Quest. Uriah, you are a pilgrim indeed! - Will
Good message. Achilles had that betraying heel... I'd go with Zeus!
for my own personal choice, I'd go with Hector..good message in this poem, always a pleasure to read your words.
this was comforting Uriah and powerful and optimistic! you own the world and not vice versa! excellent write! ! HBH
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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What an empowering poem Uriah! You really care for people and that is so wonderful.......and it shines right through in your poems. Sincerely, Mary