Zindgi Se Ruswai Poem by Swati Awasthi

Zindgi Se Ruswai

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Chot tmko lgi, chot humko lgi,
Ye lgi aag kaise bujhegi kbhi,
Chhorkar ap duniya chle to gye pr bichur kaise paoge mn se kbhi,
Chhedne ki ye adat purani hi thi,
Chorne ki ye adat kha sikh li,
Prn nibhane ki adat tmhari hi thi,
Pran dene ki adat kha sikh li,
Ap hste hasate the sbko mgr,
ye rulane ki adat kha sikh li,
Q gye ap mhfil sji chorkr,
kaun aisi gahan raj ki bat thi,
Ap milne gye te sbhi k yaha,
aakhri apki ye mulakat thi,
Bs usi yad ko hm sanjoe hue,
Watika ki kali aaj anjan hai,
Pura ghr ro rha, ro rhi hr kli,
Bagwa ke bina bag veeran hai........

Zindgi Se Ruswai
Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is for my father.My father is not in this world, I misss u sooooo much PAPA.........
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 08 October 2015

Heartfelt tribute and a homage to your dear father who left this world untimely. This poem has everything required for being classified as a great write. It creates a poignant atmosphere throughout. May I quote some of the most absorbing parts of the poem: Prn nibhane ki adat tmhari hi thi / Pran dene ki adat kha sikh li, Ap hste hasate the sbko mgr / ye rulane ki adat kha sikh li, Bagwa ke bina bag veeran hai

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Swati Awasthi 09 October 2015

thanx.........

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Swati Awasthi 09 October 2015

thanx.....

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M Asim Nehal 07 October 2015

Ati Uttam, Bachhon ke jeewan mein Maa aur Baap dono ka mahatva utna hi hota hai, yeh jeewan ke pahiyon ki tarah kaam karte hain, May God Bless you and RIP for ur father. Nice poem..... I invite you to read my poems, Thanks.

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Swati Awasthi 07 October 2015

thanx sir

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Swati Awasthi 07 October 2015

thanqu sir

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Swati Awasthi 07 October 2015

Lyf is a beautiful gift of God.u know friends, hme apni lyf se bht pyar krna chaiye, kbhi b ise bojh ni smjhna chaiye, kbhi b kisi problem me ho pr kbhi apni lyf ko khtm ni krna chahiye ye glt h, bhgwan ne hme zindgi jine k lie di hai kuch krne k lie di h mrne k lie ni....struggle kro aur jb tm khud pareshan ho jao tb apne se kmjor logo k bare me socho jinke pas ek time tik se khane ko nasib ni hota .....so plz khud k lie ni blki dusro k lie jio.khud k lie jina b kya jina h, dusro k lie jina hi zindgi h.....

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