Betrayer Poem by Brandon Dugan

Betrayer

Rating: 5.0


I feel the cold steel on my forehead
A kick in the back leads my way
Walking into my own shadow of death I go
I hear death laughing with every step I take
The gun hammer clicks
The bullet penetrates my brain
Under the moonlight I fall
Never to be seen again...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jhon Fernandis 29 April 2009

very nice great heads off +10 for that please comment on my poem and vote it but vote it from you'r heart and soul best of luck and keep writing

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Tasha Smeltser 10 June 2008

thats a very interesting poem.....i like it

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Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

wow great poem one of my favorites

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