There was a time in recent past
When sunshine found a way to last,
When fear receded with the night,
To stand aside for hope's new light.
A quiet hour where time began
And symphony of daylight rang
Indeed, that time was warm and free,
Too bad then, it ran out on me...
lovely, but you are still in the Carribean are you not? I hope the sun comes back into your life to stay. It could be worse, you could live in England god forbid.
Beautiful flow and effortless rhymes abound in this sad and reflective write. jz
Economical, yet covers a lot of significant ground. Laden with loss, longing and regret. Very fine work. jim
Time runs out from all... its a matter how we make the most of it that counts! Simply amazing! Thanks Shaye. worth the 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting play with time, a call to remember to enjoy to its fullest. Great piece!