Dive into cold water,
And this morning
You might discover,
Dazed by the frigid shock,
When you stop wanting
You have everything.
Great poem Jon you should have called it 'Fear'. You are right as fear stops from having an adventurous life and also a creative one. Wish I knew this when I was your age as it might have made a difference. Thank you for your comments on a 'A Just cause' and a Plea. Your version might work but I feel it would lose its impact. Both poems came from a very long poem I wrote called 'Whispers'. I see you give spiritual guidance, may I ask what kind? You can reply direct if you want my email is: - blackwell@futurenet.co.za. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards Bob
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written verse in easy-to-understand language. I love the message, it conveys! Deanna xx