Eternal Flame Poem by Bonnie Collins

Eternal Flame

Rating: 4.4


Kindering from within the ashes
of my soul your flame still could
not be extinguished

Like a flicker in the wind upon
a very blustery day, still stood
strong as an eternal flame

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 21 April 2008

Bonnie, precious images captured here, something I can see easily in my mind's eye. Rgds, Ivan

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 04 April 2009

short but true! remind me of Scriabin's Vers la Flame. keep writing!

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Sadiqullah Khan 09 January 2009

That is exactly what gives warmth to our existence, , , , well written Bonnie, ,10

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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2008

lingering flames of memories unexinguished...thanks for sharing your sad feels, Bonnie...10

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Alison Cassidy 30 April 2008

Such a melancholy piece filled with anguish and regret. Beautifully written. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Andrew Blakemore 29 April 2008

Again so beautiful Bonnie, the fires of eternal love can never be extinguished. Love, Andrew x

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Bonnie Collins

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Middletown New York
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