Final Hour Poem by Paul Storm

Final Hour



how many falling
leaves of faded summer
glories crackling under

your bare feet
cradling the next
will it take my friend?

i have defeated you
with the breath of a child
striking this final hour

and you know too well
there are no more
places to walk

except for us to
leave these leaves
for summer is gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi A 24 April 2009

A nice composition. The symbolism it thought provoking.

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Sadiqullah Khan 29 April 2008

leave these leaves, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , nice write

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WILLIAM SIENES III 28 March 2008

Love this one, Nomi, especially 'i have defeated you/ with a breath of a child'.

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