Goddess
Of my fragile dreams,
I’ll run my fingers
Through your hair.
I’ll kiss you
Slowly in the shower
Until there is nothing but love.
Uriah, an evocative piece. The title drew me in and I was not sure what to expect. This is a short departure from your usual style. Nevertheless it is delivered with more than enough aplomb. Excellent. Truly evocative.
Um...can somebody please pass the squeegee? It's gettin' a bit steamy in here. Shannon
short, simple and sensual! I liked the fact that it is unfinished.. it leaves a lot to the reader's imagination doesn't it? ! HBH
This does present a certain mood and feeling. Very provacative.
This is concise and very focused, Uriah. Beautiful image. Raynette
Damn! Is it getting hot in here?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hmm....somebody's in a great mood! Very nice Uriah! You do have a way of creating a mood with your poems. Sincerely, Mary