Going Down Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Going Down

Rating: 3.1


Down, down, down
There is no end,
It is an elevator that won’t rise,
As it gets hotter,
It eats you inside out
Burning, burning, burning
You feel hollow,
As you get deeper
It gets harder to look up,
Voices call down to you,
But it gets harder to hear,
You start to wonder,
You start to question,
But it’s all too late,
There is nothing left…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassie Randall 27 March 2007

very interesting. enjoyed it

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Evaughn Gray 01 August 2007

that's a very good poem....i liked it ~hazel

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Ana x 06 April 2007

Very often i feel this way, but i don't think that i can get into words the same u did Listen to the song called (The unnamed feeling) it's for Metallica it talks also about this feeling that u don't know and that breaks humans down, it will inspire u to write more lovely poems, TC XXXXXXXX

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fanniesson - 04 April 2007

not my style but you gotta love it and i do mike fanniesson

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Madly In Love 29 March 2007

Another one of ur great poems

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Anita Blake 28 March 2007

hey good poem, its very interesting.

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