I Can'T See Nobody Poem by Jay Taylor

I Can'T See Nobody

Rating: 5.0


See them fish swim in your eyes
Let it come to know surprise
That nobody will sit to close
No, nobody will sit to close

See yourself sleep in a dream
In a house of dolls or so it seems
Nothing else is real
No, nothing else is real

See your ship sail from the shore
Bringing home the dead to your door
Its so unkind
Yes, its unkind

Let the apples grow on your tree
Reflect the moon from the sea
Its just a dream
Yes, all just a dream

See the faces lost in the rain
See the water pour from the brain
There only tears
Yes, there only tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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