The Way I Feel Poem by Jerrica Bloomfield

The Way I Feel



No one knows the way I feel
It’s unlikely to be healed
I have fallen off the face of the earth
For there is nothing else that is worth
All the trouble and strive
I try to keep myself alive
Who knows what’s wrong?
My hearts been like this all along
My mind is an everyday battle
Reminding me of all my troubles
My eyes see everyone surrounding me
They won’t just let me be
Can someone please tell me how?
I’m supposed to be happy
When everyone knows that
I’m nothing in that manner
I need to know how to be better
Life is a horrible place
Especially when you can’t see his face
Yes this is a love poem
And no one knows how much I long to see his smile
Just one more time before I walk down this aisle
I wish he was here to give me away
And yet still this wish can not full filled
He is gone and this wish can not be healed
Maybe it’s my fault he left with out me saying by
He left me behind in this one little lie
Why am I unhappy
Some one please tell me
Yes this was my daddy
And yes he left me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diana Poems 11 July 2006

Jerrica, I am sorry about your dad. Please remember that God makes choices only for the good. He would never want anyone to take away the strongest gift He can give- life. This poem is very strong and well-written. There is a lot of emotions here from you. Stay strong and God bless.

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