*~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Never Be Friends! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ~* Poem by dana XxX

this poem scared me whilst reading it.. as i had some unsettle waters with my friend, who has our name.. i hope it is not prophetic.. watch your spelling n tenses.. but good poem.

this is pretty good. just has a lot of spelling errors... otherwise it has a nice rhythm. good write!

yes how it ends never be friends never be friend of not 'her' or 'him' and anybody else superb! ! 10 times rated 10! ! write some more Dana! ..Ali

I think just about everyone can relate to this poem... nicely written yet so sad...

nice poem, touching lines

I agree with jaye. this is really really good. and you should be proud that you can write like this: ]

wow x i think at the age of 16 you should be very proud. its a really good poem, really touching, xx

there are times and fights when one thinks he/she can never be friend with friend he/she is in fight with.................though many regret it later...........hope that's not your case good work

agreed with your bold idea..love it and appreciate your expressions, , , well doen 10+++++++++

really bold, but i hope u havnt jumped into conclusions like this too fast1