: (Since You Been Gone: ( Poem by dana XxX

: (Since You Been Gone: (

Rating: 5.0


i see the dark clouds coming up again
the drops fall slowly then it begun to rain
but its ok let it fall down on me
and let it wash every single memory

~about you~

everything is differant now since you been gone
its like you spread your wings and fly so high
but you leaved me here down alone
its been like years but im still in the same zone

~wondering if you ever gonna come back~

i really didnt want you to go away
i wanted you to stay just for one more day
but you didnt care for what i say
what left for me now to do is pray

~and hope~

i dont think the hurt is ever gonna heal
why can i just forget about how i feel
give me one way to make this disapear
oh i wish that it was'nt real

~just a bad night mare~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 27 July 2009

significant and lovely wording! 10+

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Patrick A. Martin 20 July 2009

nice effort I like it. It says I'm fifteen very well and you describe how it is. - work on spelling Dana it's important.

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Louis Rams 15 July 2009

a very good write! keep it up. i'll give it a ten because it comes from the heart.

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