``**my Fantasy World``** Poem by dana XxX
``**my Fantasy World``**
as i was walking the birds were singing above me
the weather is so nice and the blue sky is all i can see
looking at the flowers dancing with the wind breeze
making me smile and say dont stop it please
and i started thinking everyhing is so good to be true
but i didnt cared that much cause i was enjoing the view
is it reality or its just my fantasy world
is it a dream that i dont wanna wake from
but onec i open my eyes everythings fade away
i wished that i could live in this world just for one more day
but its like this word had closed its door
and i start fulling with doubt im not gonna be there anymore
im speachless so i sat in silence for a little while
and the thoughts start flowing in my mind
i think this happened befor i mean the dream
but my eyes was'nt closed so was it real?
yea i remeber..this always happen when you are around
just the sound of your voice make me fall dawn
and thats when i start with my dream
and then i realize that i dont have to close my eyes and wait for the dream to come
as long as your with me i'll be living in my fantasy world
love is the elixir of life.... it is such nice feeling that is beyond explanation...
hey......................................... Dana.. you be in it. love that is
i know what it's like...to want to be with someone and have them make u feel like ur living ur dream every day...i know that feeling...but for me...my dream faded away because i let him go...my mom hated him...and i was too scared to stand up to her...she would of sent me away...to live with my real mother...now i'm with someone that makes me happy...but never makes me feel like i'm living my dream everyday...that's what i got out of ur beautiful poem...if u love him...hold on tight to him...never let him go...cuz i learned that...if u do...u may never get them back...and i don't think i'll b able to live in my fantasy world with my eyes open...so thank u...for sharing this poem...it was a very good one... :)
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4/26/2024 10:46:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Love is in the air, everywhere I look around..every site every sound.....beautifully written piece DaNA.....keep up the great work....you have a natural gift 10