Dhanesh (trying to be) poet Poems

(I know the following poem is really big, but I hope you enjoy the story)

Timu and Tigi were friends,
they lived at different ends,
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It was not raining but sky was a big cloud
I heard my name and looked into the crowd
Saw you right there...waving in purple and blue
Agone, we wished to be each other's shroud.
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There is rhythm in my talk, have you grooved by it ever?

There is dream in my sight, have you seen it ever?
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A mere smile is giving me feeling of guilt,
Feeling of sadness has engulfed my heart into the dark well it has built.
Knowing someone wont be around does shatter,
makes feel of the night even as the sunlight scatter,
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when i reached her place, eager to see her face,
as i was fastening my fingers through my hair,
i felt scintillated, my god! ! ! today her charm was so so so fair,
& my heart started singing.....
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Has been long since I had a fight,
Has been long since I did a write,

Has been long since I was offended to compete,
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When I was child, I called Him DevBappa
Then came to know His many names to call.
His stories always fantasized and inspired all,
well, God's stature is ever growing tall.
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How long does it take you to turn other way,
how long you take to open wings & flyaway,

no matter how comfortably with me you groove,
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On eve of this holy dark night, I see some stars twinkling up there bright.
One is Red, other is Blue another White.
Can someone tell me which one should I follow because I dont know which one is Right.
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(saw a sweet girl in bus... she was interesting so tried to describe what she did)

I wonder what you were upto,
I wonder what you think,
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