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Lines from a sad heart

A mere smile is giving me feeling of guilt,
Feeling of sadness has engulfed my heart into the dark well it has built.
Knowing someone wont be around does shatter,
makes feel of the night even as the sunlight scatter,
Truely hard to see people turning into memories and relations and their freshness starting to wilt.
Today when I touched the cold feets, I saw no hand touching my head and I realised how much their presence and priceless blessings matter.

- -
Dhanesh Aradhye
(17 Oct 2008)

Submitted: Friday, October 17, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, May 12, 2010


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  • Ted M (7/4/2009 1:06:00 PM)

    When your loved ones, your elders are no more, you miss their caring attitude, their love towards you, their blessings and their good wishes and you may cry silently in Joy for knowing them. Well written.

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  • Hunter Dasten (11/25/2008 10:01:00 PM)

    I liked this poem very much. How true it is, no matter how strong one is, we need the ones who care for us far more than we truly realize.

  • Jathin Aka Jesuzz (11/23/2008 4:37:00 AM)

    real nice you dont have to try u r a poet...

  • Reshma Ramesh (11/9/2008 8:32:00 AM)

    ohhhhh cold feet.....so sad.....life goes on nice one there

  • Amit Gokhale (10/21/2008 4:15:00 AM)

    Hi dhanu its a nice tribute for some one, i know who is he. Don't worry, the people who truely love you and you love them, will never be short of blessing even if they are in there final journey.

  • Kesav Easwaran (10/18/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    forget the hands...feel the hearts...that is the true way how blessings come...good meaningful write, Dhanesh 10

  • Anjali Sinha (10/17/2008 2:21:00 PM)

    so sad dhanu
    really u made me cry
    ++++++10 regards anju

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