Sunset Moonshine

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0018.***when I Cry*** - Poem by Sunset Moonshine

When i cry
I cry out tears
along with all my fears.

Venting my feelings
And compressing my emotions
Hoping it will help with my depression.

I don't let people see me cry
For then I could die.

So when i cry
I cry my fears away
Till' another day...


Comments about 0018.***when I Cry*** by Sunset Moonshine

  • Rookie - 0 Points Melanie Williams (12/7/2008 7:57:00 PM)

    discribes me. great job (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Venus McHeart (12/1/2008 11:40:00 AM)

    simple but i like it NICE JOB! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (11/27/2008 5:33:00 PM)

    Been there too SM...thank you for sharing this.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 17, 2009


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