0017.Alone Poem by Sunset Moonshine

0017.Alone

Rating: 5.0


Im all alone
As still as a stone,
I just want to groan,
But i can't cause if i do,
You will have to pay the dew,
But i don't want it to be you.

Im all aone,
I dont want to drown,
But my heart is going down,
I can't think clearly,
It's all hazy,
It's just to crazy.

Im all alone it just can't be,
Oh can't you see,
Im not filled with glee,
Im to alone,
That i'll turn to stone,
If you hear my groan.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 20 January 2009

I love this poem of yours.... I can relate to it very much so....

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Astrid Hardjana 19 January 2009

Well written, great expression of what that title means

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Ana Zaldivar 19 January 2009

yeap, realistic. and it's very well written. you expressed just what some of us feel in this moment, and you used precise words to describe it.10++

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Samia Gamel 19 January 2009

realistic...............................................

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