A new born baby
Cries loud, entering this world
Responds to Mom’s touch
Nov.4/06
Mel, I just love Haiku's, especially using traditional form (5,7,5) well done, true words. I have lots of Haikus too, check them out if you like, keep them coming and I will keep reading and look out for you.
So true, as mom responds to the cry. Excellent Melvina. All the best, Diane
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gorgeous, and oh so absolute in purity....A FINE EXHIBIT OF MODERNIST HAIKU, but while maintaining the Zen, Traditoionalist metreing....Nice Job, Melvina '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }