(018) Blessed By God (Haiku) Poem by Melvina Germain

(018) Blessed By God (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


A new born baby
Cries loud, entering this world
Responds to Mom’s touch

Nov.4/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2006

Gorgeous, and oh so absolute in purity....A FINE EXHIBIT OF MODERNIST HAIKU, but while maintaining the Zen, Traditoionalist metreing....Nice Job, Melvina '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }

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Lisa Wilkinson 29 March 2007

Mel, I just love Haiku's, especially using traditional form (5,7,5) well done, true words. I have lots of Haikus too, check them out if you like, keep them coming and I will keep reading and look out for you.

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Kurt Rees 20 February 2007

short and sweet.... very nice!

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Diane Violet 04 November 2006

So true, as mom responds to the cry. Excellent Melvina. All the best, Diane

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nn mn 04 November 2006

Nice - but equally true: Responds to Mom’s non-touch.

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David Tanguay 04 November 2006

another fine way of describing a true blessing

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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