(022) Waiting For The Baby Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(022) Waiting For The Baby

Rating: 2.8


We are waiting for the baby
To smile its sweet smiles
We are waiting for the baby
To touch the nursery tiles
We are waiting for the baby
To say its first word
We are waiting for the baby
To taste its first curd
we are waiting for the baby
To eat its first snack
We are waiting for the baby
To give us all a smack!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Diane Violet 26 January 2007

Risha this is so cute and funny...............well done! Love and Hugs, Diane

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Duncan Wyllie 28 January 2007

Very subtle and quite sweet, well done Love duncan X

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Raghavan Warrier 28 January 2007

In a very subtle way you have portrayed how a baby changes our lives and takes control of it. Excellent.

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Lauren Degnan 09 November 2007

You go girl.It's colorful in artistic ways.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

I have said it before but will say it again, india must be a magical place to be so gifted with such talented daughters... Risha

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David Harris 19 February 2007

Risha, so young, yet you write so beautifully and it is a pleasure to read, this is no exception. Just keep up the writing. David

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Aldo Kraas 01 February 2007

This poem is wonderful

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 February 2007

The poem sounds like a lullaby to a baby. Very nicely written.

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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