0284 A Poet To His Critic, Ok? Poem by Michael Shepherd
0284 A Poet To His Critic, Ok?
Look, everyone from birth to death, yeah? is
tryin' to express somethin', right? , that
goes beyond
what they've expressed before, OK? so
what we need isn't a ton of crit-shit, yeah? but
a little help and advice would be appreciated... right?
an' we don't ask for praise, OK? although
it's always nice, yeah? but
a little encouragement would be appreciated... right?
uh, spoken like a true, whatever - POET.
lil' bit hesistant here to comment on your works, sir, in fact, I was reading your poems from time to time and trying to study and relate on some. This poem was kinda comical with bits of sarcasm, a light poem indeed, yeah free-verse, ok? yeah? right...oh yeah. Hope all the critics in poetic world will treat their co-poets/writers with all fairness, honesty and constructive critisms to further enhance their crafts. So far, I received good feedbacks and especially your kind appreciation on my mails. Again, loads of thanks, sir.....
I like this one. We should never be criticized for expressing ourselves. Excellent job.
Dancing on your sandcastle, you missed the point of the poem. Oh well.
Made me smile. You who are so full of beautiful language took on a completely different character, and it worked! And again, you said a lot without really saying it...a lesson all of us could remember well. Raynette
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 1:17:45 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Good comments always appreciated...... :) Good write Michael