Manonton Dalan

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042211T warm enough for me


scantily clad beautiful girls, boys
offering discounts on everything
from dinner, tours to flight home
i walk around them pretending
i am from there, doing errand
it didn't work they can smell me

i oblige; got free drinks ticket
from one of those club houses
that dotted whole beachfront
i will give it away to lucky person
surfers are having fun, good waves
i dip my foot, pretty warm to swim

Submitted: Saturday, April 23, 2011
Edited: Saturday, May 21, 2011
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