john tiong chunghoo

Bronze Star - 2,533 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

09 Haiku - Criss Crossing Shadows - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

haiku one:

in criss-crossing shadows
of the mountains, we admire
sunbathed summits

haiku two:

in criss crossing shadows
we admire sunbathed
summits

haiku three:

tottering ballet dancer
the butterfly flutters
round a bloom

haiku three:

dead widow's bamboo bell
each chime echoes
a memory of her

dead widow's bamboo bell
each chime numbs
the mind

dead widow's bamboo bell
each chime echoes
a lonely year/her lonely years

haiku four;

dead widow's bamboo bell
forelorn the chime
has become

tanka:

dugout river
a nude doll stares
right through me
i discover stephen king and
- shiver


Comments about 09 Haiku - Criss Crossing Shadows by john tiong chunghoo

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (4/29/2014 3:27:00 PM)

    ........oh each one of these is so beautiful and enchanting....wish I could write like this... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (4/29/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    Chu goo writes such wonderful haiku's! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,035 Points Herbert Guitang (4/28/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    Very enthralling kind of haiku. Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (3/9/2014 8:33:00 PM)

    ...........an interesting and imaginative write...enjoyed... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (8/6/2009 3:52:00 PM)

    I find 'tottering ballet dance' presents a very imaginative and lively picture.
    I prefer the first 'dead widow's bamboo bell over the second one.
    The tanka produces the effect that it describes. Nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (8/4/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    Shadows are eternally fascinating to
    the poetic mind. But I was most moved
    by the widow and her bamboo bell.
    That poignant sound resonates.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 25, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 17, 2014


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