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1. A House upon the Height by john tiong chunghoo

10/12/2008 4:43:10 PM
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john tiong chunghoo
( A Malaysian Poet)
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1. A House upon the Height
 
  an abandoned house
saps the spirit with its
nagging and chilling
emptiness, a black hole
that sucks out the
shimmering warm sun
to throw shadows and
ice over the hazy lanes of
imagination

a broken empty house
on the height echoes
relentless gloom and tales of woe
through each of its missing
chilling window panes
missing pages of a horror
story that solicit entries
from the haunted mind
of an innocent who has
lost his way in the dark of night

the overgrown grass
strays haphazardly and
almost in a haste to doors,
windows, walls and collapsing
roof to claim its static prey

they wake up a body of
monks (ghost bumps)
with their reverberating
aum aum chants that
have the negative effects
of sending shivers down one's spine

a torn and soiled jacket strewn
across the menacing garden
a little baby's drum, holed and beaten
out of shape by the unkind weather
carry with them broken dreams

an empty house wears itself out
sooner than an occupied house
a world shunning loner, who eventually
descends into despair, a wretched
soul losing all its charm and love

john tiong chunghoo


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Ben Gieske (8/26/2008 7:53:00 AM)
This poem is open to multiple meanings. I can read it as referring to one house (the sucking in effect) , or to two houses (the second one with forces echoing outward) . I like the “lazy lanes of imagination” and the vivid images that follow in the outdoors around this house.
Callie Carroll (8/10/2008 4:28:00 PM)
Excellent! Thank you for including your source of inspiration; I too use this technique (reading is my fuel) . What a perfect way to describe the way a decrepit house captures us, 'saps the spirit with its nagging and chilling emptiness.' You communicate perfectly the despair.

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