leonard daranjo


(1) Celestial Visitor - Photographic Impression


…..I …..

Spearing darkness
An eye blinked flash
Celestial aberration
Dribbling droplets of fire

…..II…..

Celestial javelin
Slicing the night
Showering shards
Of iridescent light

Submitted: Saturday, October 20, 2007
Edited: Monday, April 18, 2011

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  • Abha Sharma (4/23/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    Here 'figures of speech' wonder about their own innovativeness

    This Cosmic eccentricity has glistened our intellect and helped man to step on moon…
    The way you have brought about the visual effects of night …spearing darkness…slicing
    Amazing phrases emitting affective responses….creative and impressive… (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (2/10/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    And an awesome impression it is! You have described a cosmic event with pure elegance, and unearthly brilliance. Simply wonderful!
    Linda :) (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (10/31/2007 11:00:00 AM)

    The creative fires burn brightly in this piece, Leonard. The mind takes pictures that only the discerning eye can see. Brilliant.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Alison Cassidy (10/24/2007 11:22:00 PM)

    Your evocation is dynamic and intense - a wonderful mix of the visual and the acoustic. The reader can really the vastness of your photographic impression. Great piece. love, Allie xxxxx (Report) Reply

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