leonard daranjo

(1) Celestial Visitor - Photographic Impression - Poem by leonard daranjo

…..I …..

Spearing darkness
An eye blinked flash
Celestial aberration
Dribbling droplets of fire


Celestial javelin
Slicing the night
Showering shards
Of iridescent light

Comments about (1) Celestial Visitor - Photographic Impression by leonard daranjo

  • (4/29/2008 10:08:00 PM)

    Likewise.. inspirational! ! ! I see Mecurial energy in that javelin... (Report) Reply

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  • (4/23/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    Here 'figures of speech' wonder about their own innovativeness

    This Cosmic eccentricity has glistened our intellect and helped man to step on moon…
    The way you have brought about the visual effects of night …spearing darkness…slicing
    Amazing phrases emitting affective responses….creative and impressive…
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  • Linda Ori (2/10/2008 11:59:00 AM)

    And an awesome impression it is! You have described a cosmic event with pure elegance, and unearthly brilliance. Simply wonderful!
    Linda :)
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  • (1/29/2008 2:48:00 PM)

    This poem makes me want to go outside and stair into the night sky, you show things that I cannot see, but you make me want to see them. (Report) Reply

  • rajagopal haran (11/13/2007 9:34:00 AM)

    rich imagination which only poets like you can pictorise; great poem (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2007 11:00:00 AM)

    The creative fires burn brightly in this piece, Leonard. The mind takes pictures that only the discerning eye can see. Brilliant.

    Warmest regards,

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  • (10/24/2007 11:22:00 PM)

    Your evocation is dynamic and intense - a wonderful mix of the visual and the acoustic. The reader can really the vastness of your photographic impression. Great piece. love, Allie xxxxx (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2007 1:24:00 AM)

    you mastery your command is immense.. metaphors laze under your magical spell... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 20, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 18, 2011

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