Treasure Island

Ahmad Shiddiqi

(March 7,1974 / Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia)

10.10


(dedicated to Saint Cynosure, a poet friend at poemhunter)

Bread is dancing inside December
I think I know what I’m doing
Wet road is so dark, so dark
Cute children play hide and seek
Sweaty farmers dig very deep holes
Who’s wrong and who’s right?

(inspired by Deep Purple’s Perfect Strangers)

Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008
Edited: Friday, February 20, 2009

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