18 (A Final Tribute) Poem by Christopher's Dead

18 (A Final Tribute)



When you cried, I was there to lift you up
Make you whole again
You always said I helped mend your broken heart
But you always said I would never lose your hand
Now I know that what we were was so pathetic
Just contemplating
Indescribable synthetic makeup of a heart
Crisscrossing over, underneath our veins connected

But everything is wrong now, everything was right
Who’s to say our masochistic way of thinking
Was nothing but a lie?

Gave in to romance
A novel with our faces on the cover
Never read the ending
Wish I had then maybe I’d be sober
Instead I’m so deadly hung-over
A grave, unsteady pile of stones
Ready to tumble and crush you in your sleep
This is my final tribute to you

Eighteen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow this is really good i like the view you took on it and the way you expressed yoursself

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Lady Of The Rose 09 December 2009

'Gave in to romance, A novel with our faces on the cover, Never read the ending' I love that line. This is really good i like the way you express yourself. It has a really good flow to it

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Lexi Zamora 22 December 2010

Chris please tell me what's going on? ? ? ..If someone knows the truth about his suicide please tell me! ! !

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Iron Panda 23™ 01 March 2010

deepnesss.....i <3 it! !

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Tessa Rena 08 February 2010

this poem is really deep and i really like it

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Tricia Dildine 26 December 2009

WOW! i was looking for a poem that contributed to my relationship with my boyfriend, and i found it. this poem kicks a**! i lov eit to death: >

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Ronn Michael Salinas 24 December 2009

I see it as murderous. Cool poem, Christopher.

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