1924: A Love Story Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

1924: A Love Story

Rating: 4.7


The day you walked in
Stood on my door
You were nineteen
I was twenty four.
A look at your face
Weakened my knees
In your sweet fairness
I experienced bliss.
Throbbed hard my heart
My body felt so light
That spelt the start
Of my love at first sight!
The day you walked in
There wasn't anymore
Happiness for nineteen
Peace for twenty four.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 03 September 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem. Very nice and well written, A good feeling poem.

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Salini Nair 24 July 2014

beautiful...love story.............like it

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 August 2014

Very well expressed and finely crafted piece that abounds love with happiness and peace.............great write

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Vishal Sharma 11 June 2013

memorable unbelievable great and great and great do check my poems too plz

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George Price 30 July 2013

Wonderful treatment, clearly a very personal and intelligent poem. Thanks for the comment on my work. Please do continue to read and comment.

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Chinedu Dike 26 April 2020

Witty and very passionate.

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 29 April 2018

Love at first sight, beautiful expression of a life event.

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Tobra Dex 10 November 2017

This is very good poem thank you

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

Clever and beautiful. Thank you Peace

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Akhtar Jawad 31 March 2015

A beautiful poem, from the deceptive title I supposed it started in 1924. Reading the poem I came to know it was an affair of 24 and 19. In my case it's 1621.

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