The day you walked in
Stood on my door
You were nineteen
I was twenty four.
A look at your face
Weakened my knees
In your sweet fairness
I experienced bliss.
Throbbed hard my heart
My body felt so light
That spelt the start
Of my love at first sight!
The day you walked in
There wasn't anymore
Happiness for nineteen
Peace for twenty four.
Very well expressed and finely crafted piece that abounds love with happiness and peace.............great write
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Wonderful treatment, clearly a very personal and intelligent poem. Thanks for the comment on my work. Please do continue to read and comment.
Love at first sight, beautiful expression of a life event.
A beautiful poem, from the deceptive title I supposed it started in 1924. Reading the poem I came to know it was an affair of 24 and 19. In my case it's 1621.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I enjoyed reading this poem. Very nice and well written, A good feeling poem.