5 Wishes Poem by Mason KT Goldstein

5 Wishes

Rating: 5.0


so many wishes in so much time
so many lovers fighting for time
so many captives looking for more crime
so many number have just entered their prime
5 wishs can fix everything
5 linnits can make a linnit sing
5 wishes can let you know
why in the world you would ever want to go
so many wishes can do so much damage
so many wishes can give you such an advantage
so many wishes can throw you away
so many wishes are being wished...today?
why are these wishes picking the words
jus so they can make that wish serve
a rally with the stars on 11: 11
but those sad
happy, gloomy, sappy
wishes
would become true when ever its pleasent

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Mason KT Goldstein

Mason KT Goldstein

Trenton, NJ
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