A Beaten Heart Poem by debbie wagoner

A Beaten Heart

Rating: 5.0


I have a beaten heart
It's been that way from the very start.
As an infant it was harmed
God meant for this, don't be alarmed.

You see my heart is still bruised and beaten
there is no safety no I won't be leaving.
I have learned to live with a beating sore
can't return this one to heavens door.

I have a beaten heart
It's been pulled and torn apart.
I just close my eyes and pray to one day heal
for my beaten heart to mend and to finally feel.

I have a beaten heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 14 July 2009

So well written and at the same time so much of a happy, and up beat attitude. Well inspiring be these words to life's fully challenged ways of strife! God bless us all-MJG.

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~ Jon London ~ 14 July 2009

I love the tone to your voice in this wonderful poem....you paint the picture of your pain through a smile....it brings hope to many that feel the same....it's a lovely piece to share 10

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Miranda Van Yperen 27 August 2009

wow thats a wonderful poem.... thanks for sharing it with me, with everyone. :)

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Patrick A. Martin 16 August 2009

Nice piece Debbie we who have heart problems (my heart attack was in 1987) can identify with this piece,

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Barbara Terry 24 July 2009

Those of us that have a beaten heart can identify with this poem. This is a very deep piece and I love the message at the end. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Sara Hammouri 24 July 2009

What a great poem.. it made me feel the hurt it's a very nice poem.. keep up the good work and hope we will be friends too: D

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Wiskey Pete 23 July 2009

The sprit of who you are lights your words and touches me and fills me with inspiration. This is a truly touching piece.

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