nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 145 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Bird Flies Beyond The Sky - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

This rare bird tells of its encounter
When the Telescopic man gossips;
'I found nothing but emptiness
And I was breathless
Then I *flew downwards.'

* The bird used that instead of declining it seems.

Comments about A Bird Flies Beyond The Sky by nimal dunuhinga

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/26/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    a good write Nimal enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,113 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (6/21/2010 6:50:00 AM)

    Would that have been free fall? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,834 Points Ken E Hall (2/28/2010 3:11:00 PM)

    High in the sky to find empty space same as the other end of the telescope,
    we should note....
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Oconnell (2/14/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    short and deep. i like that. thanks.

    john (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (12/17/2009 3:42:00 PM)

    Great. A new perspective of viewing ourselves. This opens up a new world of exploration. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 81,908 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2009 12:06:00 PM)

    'I found nothing but emptiness
    And I was breathless
    Then I *flew downwards.'... simply holloness inthe sky.... only beautiful in description... good write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (5/8/2009 8:16:00 PM)

    A paradoxical piece about 'venturing where no man has gone before'. Your creative imagination is in fine form today, Nimal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (5/7/2009 3:54:00 PM)

    The impossible dream of flying beyond the sky. Only those who are in touch
    with infinity can do that. Fascinating write.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 6, 2009

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