A black rose can stop the beat of ones heart…
A black rose brings the scent of death as it tears love apart…
A black rose makes nightmares reality…
A black rose fills my life with uncertainty…
A black rose is forgotten hopes and dreams…
A black rose is a broken girl laying in tears and painful screams…
A black rose is the pain of a shattered life…
A black rose is lost love in my hopeless life…
A black rose is the memories that haunt my restless soul…
A black rose took everything from me that once made me whole…
Including…you…
a black rose can be what you choose it to be, does not have to mean the end of life
I like the repetition and also the idea of having a black rose. Many times in poetry red roses are used and in some ways you used its contrast. I feel though that the ending '..including you..' could have been different. But perhaps not. None-the-less interesting read.
I told you that i would look at your poems and i did. their not as bad as you said they would be.
I recommend this poem because it has repetition. That leads to memory. Beyonfd that, it doesn't have much more going for it, because a poem like this needs an ending. I can't say much for it. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
... i cherish my love for you...... : )