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a blueprint of how it was

photograph this now
because I don’t think it
will last for very
long.

paint this picture with
night and a hint of
gray,
and hope
that it will stay for
morning.

record this moment
so I can play it back
tomorrow
when everything
goes back to how
it was.

and now
do not wish upon
my
star
unless you wish
to become it.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 19, 2006
Edited: Friday, September 17, 2010


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  • totally disturbed (11/23/2008 3:56:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed reading your words you write very well.. Wendy

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/29/2008 11:21:00 PM)

    Life is a flickering series of images that will pass us by, so preserve them now or forever lose them. Great poem, I'm glad I got to read it.

  • Cynthia Cyanide*Myspace friend ID=355388387* (11/20/2007 3:22:00 PM)

    Wow.Beautifully written! ^.^ I love this one! *adds to favorites*

  • Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi (9/24/2007 4:09:00 PM)

    this poem is beautiful, it shows how important we should take what is here now very serious. i love it.

  • Michael Shepherd (3/16/2007 12:25:00 PM)

    Ben, I'm working through your poems, but this is a great start..

  • Alfredo Jacques (11/29/2006 5:01:00 PM)

    just wanted to say great poem

  • Kailynd McGregor (10/2/2006 9:19:00 AM)

    I really do love this poem, great job. I have a poem kind of like this one!
    ~Kailynd

  • Lauren Michaels (9/27/2006 4:16:00 PM)

    I really love this poem its sweet and sort of resounding. I like the feeling of poignant finality and sorry acceptance. Lovely
    Regards,
    Lauren

  • Ernestine Northover (9/19/2006 3:11:00 PM)

    This is quite beautiful Ben. A dreamy poem, capturing that moment before it disappears into the past. Delightful.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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