photograph this now
because I don’t think it
will last for very
long.
paint this picture with
night and a hint of
gray,
and hope
that it will stay for
morning.
record this moment
so I can play it back
tomorrow
when everything
goes back to how
it was.
and now
do not wish upon
my
star
unless you wish
to become it.
I really love this poem its sweet and sort of resounding. I like the feeling of poignant finality and sorry acceptance. Lovely Regards, Lauren
I really do love this poem, great job. I have a poem kind of like this one! ~Kailynd
Ben, I'm working through your poems, but this is a great start..
Another gem, good sir. I am certainly enjoying my perusal of your anthology.
I really enjoyed reading your words you write very well.. Wendy
Life is a flickering series of images that will pass us by, so preserve them now or forever lose them. Great poem, I'm glad I got to read it.
Wow.Beautifully written! ^.^ I love this one! *adds to favorites*
this poem is beautiful, it shows how important we should take what is here now very serious. i love it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is quite beautiful Ben. A dreamy poem, capturing that moment before it disappears into the past. Delightful. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX