A Broken Heart's Poem Poem by Ashlee VanDyken

A Broken Heart's Poem

Rating: 4.6


It hurts to know that you don't care,
my heart is broken beyond repair.
My heart is ice,
My head is cold.
Our love once young is now so old.
You said you loved me,
But you lied,
Because if you loved me,
You would have tried.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 03 December 2013

i love this one.. simple but straight to the idea i can feel the emotions that you put in it very good poem

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Captain Herbert Poetry 14 November 2013

a poem with passion. Well done

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Meadow Poeticfada 12 November 2013

I like this poem, Not too much but seems enough.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 November 2013

A nice poem. Short and simple, but touchy.

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