adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

adheez van der beanthz
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I loved poetry since I was a kid and I started writing poetry when I was in junior high school
But a lot of my poetry archive that has been lost because basically I wrote just for fun, just for personal consumption
most of my poems with the theme of love, but then I started to learn and expand on the themes are more universal
I am not a good writer so I would be very grateful if I am given some input, advice or criticism
One more thing, I write in my language, the Indonesian language, then I translated it into English in this forum
So it is very possible fault wording or meaning of the poems that I posted here because I was less proficient in English
I hope my ... more »

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  • Rookie Kelly Linkous (8/15/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    I like your poetry it is very good.

  • Rookie - 23 Points Messaoud Allalouche (8/11/2013 1:11:00 PM)

    I like your peoms and special y this one you have a great talent of writing good luck friend

  • Rookie - 282 Points Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya (7/27/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    Last Kisses is a good poem aburning with the emotions of a young man for his mate

  • Rookie - 24 Points Ibrahim Ibn Salma (12/17/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    I like your soul mate poem it has a good image of a romantic setting.

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Best Poem of adheez van der beanthz

Last Kisses For Last Love

lips by lips
breath by breath
here we meet
let's forget the rest
i hug you closer
your hand in my shoulder
fondle my frozen-skin
burning every single inch
our tongues make a sign
our heartbeat write the rhyme
for a second, i mute the time
wander to your deepest mind
hope this moment last longer
no matter if we wake-up the world anger
i'll be stronger, i'll be better
as long as we stay together, forever
until the death come for sure...

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