Gold Star - 6,614 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

A Call

I lost it, I lost it
It’s my haste, that why I lost it
It was my overconfidence
Anyway I lost it
Still, do I have to try?
Trial is not sufficient
My ways are not plotted
Yet I have to try
It’s my passion
One day I will win as I am enlightened

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 18, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Topic of this poem: success

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Comments about this poem (A Call by SALINI NAIR )

  • Gold Star - 25,172 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/5/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    Beauty of optimism and determination............................. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,004 Points Valsa George (10/29/2014 11:22:00 AM)

    Patience and perseverance can overcome mountains! Never give up when you fail or lose.... Try again and again until you succeed! Greatly inspirational! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,682 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/15/2014 1:09:00 PM)

    Steady persistence in a course of action in spite of difficulties and obstacles or discouragement.........nice concept
    great write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,508 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (4/26/2014 3:38:00 AM)

    A poem in its intuitive thoughts of the poet and an ordinary could not understand the meaning in it lightly. It is good and recited in such happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,614 Points Salini Nair (4/13/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    try try try surely one day achieve it................. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poet's Fan (2/18/2014 12:53:00 AM)

    a poem of philosophical hue... (Report) Reply

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