Ray Hansell

Rookie - 409 Points (New Jersey)

A Child's World - Poem by Ray Hansell

Welcome to my world
Some say it's a simple place
Well that may be so
But at least, there's always a smile on my face

Welcome to my world
It's a world full of joy
It's a world full of love
The world to me now is just one big toy

If ever you're feeling low
If ever you have no place to go
I'll always welcome you to my world
That's something you should know

Welcome to my world
It's a world free of hate
It's a world free of wars
So please don't hesitate
To come and visit my world


Comments about A Child's World by Ray Hansell

  • Gold Star - 24,114 Points Mohammad Skati (11/14/2014 5:32:00 PM)

    This is a great poem that has its great echo on the world of childhood. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,863 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (11/14/2014 3:40:00 AM)

    Is the child's world this simple? ? Yes, I may want to live a idealistic world of yours, during my rebirth...Thank you for sharing such a concept of child's world, which they forget every twenty minutes when they are below three years old...That is the reason they repeatedly do the same thing, though we warn them many times... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,910 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (11/14/2014 2:43:00 AM)

    The children's world is full of innocence and happiness and this is a poem showing the full thoughts of a childhood and welcoming the child's world and it is highly appreciated in all respects. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/14/2014 1:55:00 AM)

    Children or the child's world is a garden of smiling flowers..thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Karen Gonzalez-videla (11/14/2013 7:45:00 PM)

    Nice poem :) I wish your world becomes the mirror of Earth one day. I invite you to read my poems, rate and comment :)

    Karen :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (11/14/2013 4:47:00 PM)

    Great poem but quite untrue... unless you're only considering those four and younger. Children can be naive but today's children are exposed to the real world very early and are maturing fast. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,205 Points Leslie Philibert (11/14/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    Like the message, even if the poem lacks depth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Guenael Oristel (1/8/2013 2:22:00 PM)

    I would definitely come to your world, because I am tired of living in this world where there's hateful, where i live my life in fear, i would come to your world to be blessed, and to live without fear. I am in love with your poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,190 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/14/2012 9:05:00 AM)

    This poem put the mind of the reader in a blissful state. The world is seen from pleasantness and optimism. Great write.I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (11/14/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    I simply love your world...thanks a lot for such a warm welcome... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Baru Gobira (7/18/2010 7:59:00 AM)

    There isn't a day of late that Ive not felt the wish to go back to my childhood world. I admire the strength of simplicity and its unending reach achieved in your poem. -Baru Gobira (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 2, 2011


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