A Childs Cure For Insominia Poem by Not Long Left

A Childs Cure For Insominia

Rating: 5.0


mummy and daddy are
always so ratty,
cause they drink coffee
and tea,
but not me,
i drink milk, nice and sweet,
and it helps me to sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 01 May 2006

Great peom Vincent - it's simplicity resounds! Kind regards, Justine

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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 January 2006

reads like a cartoon

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Michael Whitt 06 December 2005

i really dig this poem....does ratty mean tweaked out?

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Elena V. Moonray 01 December 2005

it is nice and sweet :)

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