A Closed Secret Door With A Hidden Key Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Closed Secret Door With A Hidden Key

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A closed secret door with a hidden key somewhere,
though eyes sees not, mind perceives it deep
mysteries that enshroud the secret of what lies ahead,
so many secrets, before even one is said,
my mind catches hints of what lies beyond,
each hint makes the urge to know even stronger than before
the desire to know calls my name from within
the thought of so many mysteries deep within
a tug overcome by the curiosity that is within
my heart races as I unlock the secret of all that I have seen
my spirit is enlightened and I'm filled with reverance,
the secrets I uncover make me come alive with every glance.

Finally, the door opens and reveals a secret I couldn't expect
It holds adventures unknown and knowledge I must accept
full of mysteries, some more complex than others
the mysteries linger as I slowly uncover more one after another.

Tuesday, November 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical philosophy,life,secret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 14 November 2023

unknown adventures and knowledge that I must accept full of mysteries, some more complex than others the mysteries linger as I slowly discover one after another.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 November 2023

CONTINUED: Were you able to discover everything? Or will there be a sequel to this? By the way, it was rationally described what was in your brain and it resulted in this exciting poem, I enjoyed it immensely, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 14 November 2023

The key is always there. One must go in search of it in life. Wonderful concept

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Zoyza Da Vinka 14 November 2023

Finally, the door opens and reveals a secret I couldn't expect It holds adventures unknown and knowledge I must accept, I liked it.

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Kingsley Egbukole 14 November 2023

Our mind perceives and sees more than our physical eyes. Beautiful poem

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2023

Profound piece.... extremely well penned...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 14 November 2023

I love it espeically how you wrapped it up Thanks for sharing and Bravo! ! ! !

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