Treasure Island

Charles Garcia

(10/29/1924 / Honolulu Hawaii)

A Cloudy Day


Cloudy skies obscure your view,
A slight breeze moves the clouds,
Letting in the sun-shine open up a broken sky.

A sight of blue shines through:
A warm breeze caresses your face,
Making you feel at ease.

Reminding you of the days gone by,

Sorting all anxieties leaving your
Mind free and at ease.

For a heart be none but innocent,
Giving all it has for free.

Charles Garcia
Monday, January 16,2006

Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

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  • Diane Violet (4/27/2007 7:46:00 PM)

    A pleasurable poem which leads one into serenity. Very beautiful Charles.
    All the best,
    Diane (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (3/26/2007 6:44:00 AM)

    A true poet indeed, your words are beautiful and give the feeling of warmth and calmness. Thankyou so much for this most beautiful poem.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (2/6/2007 3:22:00 PM)

    What a beautiful skyscape your words have painted. You are a poet worthy of the name.


    Kindest regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Pia Andersson (11/12/2006 4:37:00 AM)

    A whispering tender poem...you write with beauty and wisdom Tahnk you for writiing this uplifting poem! (Report) Reply

  • R H (4/15/2006 12:12:00 PM)

    I really like the gentleness of this poem - the notion that the wind can clear our minds just as it moves the clouds to reveal a clear blue sky. Kind regards, Justine. (Report) Reply

  • Duncan Wyllie (1/28/2006 8:44:00 AM)

    Dear Charles
    'A slight breeze moves the clouds'.Excellent-Powerful line!
    A Poet I suspect who didn't know it.
    Love Duncan (Report) Reply

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