Cloudy skies obscure your view,
A slight breeze moves the clouds,
Letting in the sun-shine open up a broken sky.
A sight of blue shines through:
A warm breeze caresses your face,
Making you feel at ease.
Reminding you of the days gone by,
Sorting all anxieties leaving your
Mind free and at ease.
For a heart be none but innocent,
Giving all it has for free.
Charles Garcia
Monday, January 16,2006
A whispering tender poem...you write with beauty and wisdom Tahnk you for writiing this uplifting poem!
Dear Charles 'A slight breeze moves the clouds'.Excellent-Powerful line! A Poet I suspect who didn't know it. Love Duncan
This poem really seems to capture the way a cloudy day can make you feel. Nice to read!
I really like the gentleness of this poem - the notion that the wind can clear our minds just as it moves the clouds to reveal a clear blue sky. Kind regards, Justine.
The poem is beautifully expressing the power of nature over human life. Nice words used to paint the pictures.
A pleasurable poem which leads one into serenity. Very beautiful Charles. All the best, Diane
A true poet indeed, your words are beautiful and give the feeling of warmth and calmness. Thankyou so much for this most beautiful poem.---Melvina---
What a beautiful skyscape your words have painted. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kindest regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes, Gentle is the word which come to mind. Nice poem. Anjana