(04/01/1983 / Portsmouth NH)

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A cold autumn's night

Sink deep in their yellow skins, autumn steams on.
Spent memory will depart, so will my youth.
My new steps flow in tautness, oh, so restive.
Life’s beats swayed its frosty chants, mine swathed along.

Stilled water in frozen pond, glommed for truth and warmth.
Once summer olden dream returns, haste on her way.
Across the old pond, the kind bell shaded cold wind.
Small passions for now, soon mint snow sprinkles fresh hopes.

Soaked deep in their orange skins, autumn will soon end.
Swilled of heavy angst, hovered thoughts, hard-nosed firmed breath.
I sat in dense silence, then hummed a hearty prayer.
Graduation is anon, tomorrow shall bond.

Submitted: Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, January 29, 2008


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  • Subbaraman N V (4/2/2008 11:55:00 PM)

    'Snow sprinkles fresh hopes'- beautiful!

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