Walterrean Salley

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A Cold Grey Wintry Day - Poem by Walterrean Salley

On this cold, gray-wintry day,
The sun is nowhere to be found.

Listen! I hear the rain:
Pit pat, pit pat—dripppppp, plop.
Pit pat, pit pat—dripppppp, plop.

Like a sad song, its music play
To the melancholy lyric of:
“A Cold, Gray Wintry Day.”

Comments about A Cold Grey Wintry Day by Walterrean Salley

  • Unwritten Soul (6/16/2016 9:19:00 AM)

    You are such a deep observer...and from a little thing it can be a bigger knock every minds...of the time and sounds...beautiful craft :) . Loved it (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (3/29/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    The natural rhythm of the rain is so cooling as your poem! Simple and musical! ! (Report) Reply

  • (3/25/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    A tune of winter in precipitation the seasons ring in conversation, each a character demanding appreciation, play no favourites as they rotate through station, each a seed in our imagination. I loved this poem, great effort. I love when we try to capture sounds in words and in turn their tune and lyrics, nicely done. I tried to catch a clock ticking in my poem I could not sleep, which was fun to contplate. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    You have indeed captured the sad tune of raindrops on a grey wintry day... well done. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    Sun is always there only our eyes fails to see. (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    Winter moods and rain have a definite connection.
    And you are in tune with the weather. Grey is
    a favorite poetry color of mine. Ten for you.

    Warm regards,

    (Report) Reply

  • (12/25/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    Very nice...lovely picture, well rendered portrait of a moment in time defining a universal experience. Through your poem my minds eye sees your day, written with enough space to fill in the details of days I've known. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 12:21:00 AM)

    Very simple poem with an interesting title which finally turned into the title of either a song or a movie.Kindly read this poem of mine: RAIN RAIN TAP ON MY ROOF and give your comment (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2011

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