A Compliment 4 U... Poem by Abhijit Surve

A Compliment 4 U...



You smile like a flower blooming in spring,
You shine like a diamond on a golden ring..
You sound like a nightingale whenever you talk,
You ballet like a dancer whenever you walk..


Twinkling like stars are your two beautiful eyes,
Chubby cheeks are sweetness multiplied twice..
Your hairs are like crazy wild veins intervened,
But still they resemble the crown of a queen..


Clothes that you carry seem to be always better,
Every day is something new, you are a trend setter..
Adding glitter to your legs are the anklets you wear,
You steal all the beauty and this is not fair..


Beautiful is your nature so serene and so pure,
A touch of arrogance makes you that much allure..
So tender, so soft your glossy skin is like silk,
So bright, so white flows right through like milk..


Then the most beautiful thing that lies inside you,
Is the beauty of your heart, if only people knew..
They'd see right here standing what they fail to see,
One day they'll witness you as you appear to me..


Believe me when I say that your looks are refined,
With you I’ll start when inner beauty is defined..
A Beauty so blinding, just don't know what to do,
All that I can add here is a compliment or two..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Larry 06 October 2018

This is extremely good and I really like it

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Maahi K 23 November 2009

That was so prettily written :)

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Anjali Sinha 09 March 2009

lovely smell like flower shine like diamond- 10 anjali (do read mine a TWILILGHT SONG)

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