(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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A day to start

What a day to start with in cold!
Brisk morning walk with new day in world
Life means something enterprising and new
Enough time at disposal to think and review

Nature is not lagging behind in its initiative
Everything around is in true sense objective
What cuckoo has something to do with morning melody?
When everyone is tight asleep in bed has business of no body?

"Good morning "I look around to see sweet address
Some younger and elderly people greet with smile on face
With no grievance, ill feeling or unhappiness
I feel great part of this beautiful world in such case

The leaves make little move with wind's blow
Gentle air makes fragrance move and flow
It has unique charm when you are really fresh
Whole of energy is stored in mind and ready to dash

We must thank almighty for whatever has been given
At least fresh air keeps mind really to be driven
It keeps all thoughts to one side and enjoys the greatness
Free from all worries and escape from worldly mad chase

Certainly when you greet a person at the start of the day
Think of goodwill and blessings that might be helping on the way
It is only think that human being needs in true living
"Live and let others live" with true faith and believing

When we greet certain people, the magnetic circle moves
It creates good will around and any kind of ill feeling is removed
All main religions too advise to show the smiling face
Even in adversity to stick to the ground and chase

It is to be borne in mind that each morning id different
The change is visible and is really apparent
The opportunity is on hand and considered as heavenly sent
We should take it as chance in life and enjoy as scent

Submitted: Monday, October 15, 2012


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:13:00 PM)

    Roderick Gering back at ya 100 fold 9 hours ago · Like

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:12:00 PM)

    Himani Goyal likes this. Himani Goyal nice and sweet uncle 4 minutes ago · Like

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:07:00 PM)

    Jerome66
    I liked this poem; it was good, particularly the imagery, such as The leaves make little move with wind's blow Gentle air makes fragrance move and flow, very nice.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:06:00 PM)

    Lei Vicente Tarun Good morning I look around to see sweet address
    Some younger and elderly people greet with smile on face
    With no grievance, ill feeling or unhappiness
    I feel great part of this beautiful world in such case
    10 hours ago · Like

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:39:00 AM)

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    good morning!


    Marur Seetharama Rao2 minutes ago
    The poem is as refreshing as the morning breeze!
    One is tempted to take a morning walk after reading this!
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    Nicely written

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    Rebecca Landon10 minutes ago
    Made me smile at the start of a new day!
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    New day to fill with goodness.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:38:00 AM)

    Wallace LaBenne11 minutes ago
    Live.
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    good

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:38:00 AM)

    sabrina Lynch7 minutes ago
    good
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    Nature lover?

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:38:00 AM)

    Phanibhusan Basu7 minutes ago
    carry on; and God neither need nor wait for thanks!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/15/2012 7:21:00 AM)

    What a day to start with in cold!
    Brisk morning walk with new day in world

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