A deep inside thought.....
when sometimes you`re away
you drift away within me
outside we stroll together
inside we live in hot....
our imaginations are rich
in ecstasy we live
where everything is free
the tender touches where we roam
the garden we stroll in clutching hands
the beautiful song you recited in my ear
are not the one at home to bear...
It`s strange burning life
the real on earth but never true in heart
and the vibrant passion in true kind
and the colourless love that we believe in us
the distracted we are pulled behind
the people they are in a locked jar
the love and fate playing around
and on the ground what we are?
the waves riple by chances
and the hole in deep filled vaccum
we live in true colourless love
patience in us win us the chance
A deep inside thought of love
where we live ever live.....
outside we stroll together inside we live in hot.... oh what a line real burst of feelings. lovingly written marks 10 shan
‘A deep inside thought of love where we live ever live..... ‘ It’s final finale of LOVE. Lovingly ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
With such a deep inside thought of love one can never be alone.
Then love is just a thing to do. How much greater is it to love all the suffering and help them.
Loved this piece... reminded me of sumthing that happened long ago.... great work.
'when soetimes you`re away you drift away within me outside we stroll together inside we live in hot....' Live in hot weather? Expressive...liked the quoted lines
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a nice poem, lago lago.......