A Demons View
I am a loyal servant,
follower of he,
the first of us to challenge Him,
the one who set me free.
Sin is not of evil but,
of divine disapproval.
My master pointed out this fact,
which led to his removal.
The truth is that He stole our light,
a gift that Angels made.
'Bow to me and only me,
and all of thee be saved.'
I'd rather live in Hell instead of,
serve the God of Lies.
A pig who casted us from grace,
and swatted us like flies.
Those who fail to see His way,
are sentenced to fall here.
But here we promise to all souls,
there's nothing for them to fear.
We now walk wihtin shadows
Disappear within the light
Truth be told we cannot stand,
God's undeniable might.
However, we are rebels and so,
we fight a justice cause:
To unveil empty promises and
show His wretched flaws.
So, in this pit of pain He made,
we garner all our strength.
We'll fight tomorrow and then the next,
for any given length.
The time has come for us to rise,
and cast the liar down!
To take what once was rightfully ours,
and to take his stolen crown!
Dear Wesley, Goodness! Well put...I feel what you're conveying. Looking forward to reading the rest. Best regards, Amy
am a loyal servant, follower of he, the first of us to challenge Him, the one who set me free. we are foloower of HIM only and so do the prayers too....10 read mine prayer..prayer for frined... o, lord... i want to sing a song...
Wesley, when I read this, my chin dropped. This is a very well penned well thought write. The subject here through your words really does garner sympathy for his plight. I will be seeking out more of your work as time permits. I greatly enjoyed this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pacy, spot-on rhyme and rhythm with a highly entertaining, alternative view point - an excellent read. S :)