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I had a dream short
yester night;
I saw in that
some thing of mine;
my life,
full of craze;
those sights,
them I gaze
were they of mine?
A cross junction
of love and hate;
from there a lane
leads to resting place;
the pavement there,
a heap of mud near
a plant over there,
that, my desire,
I had planted
along with you joint...
Underneath,
it was dry; there
I saw your mind
unwilling to water;
soil unsaturated
thirst not satiated,
expectations
high of mine
seen crumbled
out fallen
the desire plant
shedding dry leaves;
tear drops
water less!
My short dream thus...
Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Thursday, April 17, 2008 |
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Tuesday, July 05, 2011 |
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Sreelekha Premjit (2/11/2012 11:15:00 PM)
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nice poem.. the reality of crumbled dreams is brought out beautifully.
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Ejaz Khan (12/9/2009 3:46:00 AM)
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You certainly have great ideas and know the art of presentation, very beautiful and captivating write!
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Patti Masterman (12/2/2009 10:48:00 AM)
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Nice thoughts in here. Your ideas seem so original, and your writing's always fresh.
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rago rago (11/6/2009 12:40:00 AM)
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a dream of reality is well said........also thank yu for your kind rememberance...
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Stacey Watts (10/19/2009 10:33:00 PM)
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Dreams are a beautiful thing until more often than not reality creeps. Excellent job.
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Jessel Jane Tevar (7/18/2009 12:41:00 AM)
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a sad dream of reality...of unmet desires...of disappointments...i love re-reading this poem..the rhythm...nice shades of words u have
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Ashraful Musaddeq (6/5/2009 4:26:00 AM)
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Touching… reality and dreams... deep and nice…
Brilliant composition,10+++
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Ana Zaldivar (5/30/2009 2:25:00 PM)
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lovely poem with a nice flow of words. I like it very much.. thnks for sharing: D
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Emily Core (5/30/2009 8:58:00 AM)
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wow love it but i don`t dream at night only in the day but a dream is a dream
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Subroto Chatterjee (4/30/2009 10:10:00 PM)
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Reality and dreams....and they mirror each other often...unexpectedly. Unwelcome at times. Good write.
Cheers.
Subroto
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