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I had a dream short
yester night;
I saw in that
some thing of mine;
my life,
full of craze;
those sights,
them I gaze
were they of mine?
A cross junction
of love and hate;
from there a lane
leads to resting place;
the pavement there,
a heap of mud near
a plant over there,
that, my desire,
I had planted
along with you joint...
Underneath,
it was dry; there
I saw your mind
unwilling to water;
soil unsaturated
thirst not satiated,
expectations
high of mine
seen crumbled
out fallen
the desire plant
shedding dry leaves;
tear drops
water less!
My short dream thus...
17 04 08
Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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rago rago
(11/6/2009 12:40:00 AM) |
a dream of reality is well said........also thank yu for your kind rememberance...
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Stacey Watts
(10/19/2009 10:33:00 PM) |
Dreams are a beautiful thing until more often than not reality creeps. Excellent job.
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Jessel Jane Tevar
(7/18/2009 12:41:00 AM) |
a sad dream of reality...of unmet desires...of disappointments...i love re-reading this poem..the rhythm...nice shades of words u have
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Ashraful Musaddeq
(6/5/2009 4:26:00 AM) |
Touching… reality and dreams... deep and nice…
Brilliant composition,10+++
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Ana Zaldivar
(5/30/2009 2:25:00 PM) |
lovely poem with a nice flow of words. I like it very much.. thnks for sharing: D
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Emily Core
(5/30/2009 8:58:00 AM) |
wow love it but i don`t dream at night only in the day but a dream is a dream
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Subroto Chatterjee
(4/30/2009 10:10:00 PM) |
Reality and dreams....and they mirror each other often...unexpectedly. Unwelcome at times. Good write.
Cheers.
Subroto
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Bonnie Collins
(4/30/2009 12:44:00 AM) |
Very nicely written, and with alot of depth, however ever so transparent and penned nicely as your imagery takes the familar journey once again! !
Bonnie
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