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A dream terrified,
have lost my sleep at night,
don't know the reason why,
it has captured my sight.
Dream about a little child,
who has lost his family,
he's all alone now,
crying bitterly.
His family in bloodshed,
lost life in a fight,
fight with a terrorist,
who destoyed them within a night.
The child can't speak,
but he calls me,
to provide him shelter,
helpless is he.
I try to run at his call,
but still cannot,
don't know what is stopping me,
I try to give it a thought.
While he cries,
blood falls from his eyes,
eyes that are innocent,
and my dream away it flies.
Flies away with the night,
and I wake up in a mood terrified,
thinking was this fact or not,
thinking of the family that died.
Priyanka Bhowmick
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Catrina Heart
(6/5/2009 7:38:00 AM) |
A terrifying dream and truth that wrenched your being and others who also have the same history..............10++++++++
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Brishti Mazumdar
(6/4/2009 7:38:00 AM) |
Your terrified dream may terrify your mood,
But it makes your verse very well composed.
...Brishti Mazumdar
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Josephine De Leux
(6/1/2009 6:50:00 AM) |
The abrupt tone of it really brings the impacts out, with a steady flowing rhythm.
A dream that would make one sit in thought, isn't it? I hope never to have that dream.
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...Shekhar joshi... ;) ...
(6/1/2009 1:53:00 AM) |
really terrifying dream.......my mind guesses its reality for some though my heart wants to disbelieve this fact......
terror expressed well...
good one
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
(5/31/2009 2:39:00 AM) |
a touching poem.....
beautifully expressed.
thank you.
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Kesav Easwaran
(5/28/2009 1:10:00 AM) |
A terrifying dream well narrated there...flowing poem, Priyanka...i liked...10
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Ch J Satyananda Kumar
(5/25/2009 3:15:00 AM) |
You are penning so well about all disturbing thoughts. If it fiction it is OK. But if fact, the situation requires to be given a serious thought.
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Marieta Maglas
(5/24/2009 2:53:00 PM) |
It is a nice poem.It is written with a lot of sincerity 10++
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