A Dreamer Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

A Dreamer

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A dreamer
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In visions of yesterday's night
Of the night bird's sweeping flight
I saw I was climbing
On fancy's wings
I had a dream
I had a wish
And the world had been sleeping since

I was young and bubbling
And I wanted to change the world
To a new height, to a new shining
All through the silent night
Toward the stars-decked skies
I was racing and racing
Alas! at day break there were no dreams
And I found myself falling flat and bruised
For I realized it difficult to change the world

It mattered not to me
As I cherished another dream
That I wished to change my nation
Alas! all roses and lilies turned to thorns
But I stopped not dreaming dreams
I lost not my hopes
For I had another dream born
That I began to focus on my town
Alas! it was a dream after all
And I could not change it on my own

Now dreams fading fast
And I realized I was left with none
But at once came another one
As an older man
I tried to change my family soon
Now as an old man
I realize the only thing
That I can change is myself and my own

And suddenly I realize
That if long ago I had changed myself
I could have made an impact on my family
My family and I on our town
And their impact could have changed the nation
And I could indeed have changed
The world to a certain extent with a lesson….

Saturday, September 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 September 2014

A great truth here is unveiled through your dreams...! Only by changing oneself, one can change the world....! The only possible thing within our capacity is to try to change ourselves before we set targets of greater dimension, though that itself is challenging! A deep and thoughtful write Deepak!

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2014

Thoughtful write. Very true said in few lines...... That if long ago I had changed myself I could have made an impact on my family My family and I on our town And their impact could have changed the nation..Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Mark Arvizu 06 September 2014

I enjoy this poem. The last verse you used very straightforward language as opposed to the preceding verses where you used more imagery. This took me out of the mood you had created.

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