veeraiyah subbulakshmi


A Few People.. - Poem by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

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You are too pampered,
Always want to be patted,
Rubbing of your thinking head,
Make you to feel sedated,
You are too homesick,
Always look at the face book,
Mummy and daddy not on the list,
A family of friends is the old concept,
You are too pampered to be spoiled,
Not knowing to count the currency and the coins,
You are good at swiping the cards and the chairs,
You are the man of your own house,
That has to be dusted and cleaned.


Comments about A Few People.. by veeraiyah subbulakshmi

  • Gold Star - 6,306 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/5/2013 2:06:00 PM)

    house, That has to be dusted and cleaned
    First clean the house and then facebook, swiping cards and so on. Beautifully put. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (8/1/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    A right pointer to a problem that has to fade out.. It is a timely reminder V Subbalakshmi Madam (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,665 Points Dave Walker (8/1/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    A great poem, like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 2, 2013


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